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the walk together. by ~intricate-illusion:iconintricate-illusion:

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©2009 ~intricate-illusion
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I'm not very sure about this.
What do you think?
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Taken on Canada Day while we (my family) were taking a walk in the local park. The people in the photo are my younger brother and dad.

Recovery, saturation, and sharpening in Lightroom.

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*notcontrolfreaky Jul 4, 2009, 11:49:41 PM
First off the colours are great. Nice contrasts between the shirts and the colours of the trees and above all of course the overall colourscheme to it. Summer. Yes! I really like the idea you tried to create here and it's good how you explain it in your description, but it could've been worked out stronger. Even though I'm not sure how. Yikes.

Let's keep it to the usual: good job! :slow:

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~intricate-illusion Jul 5, 2009, 9:44:02 AM
Yesssss. I love summer.

I think it could've been stronger too, which is why I'm not sure about this. I'm not sure how I could improve on this either. :lol:

Thanks a lot for the comments!
You know, it's always nice to know what people don't like and like about a piece of art. P: It's constructive and useful.

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*notcontrolfreaky Jul 6, 2009, 12:27:33 AM
I always sound like a prick when I try to be constructive. It's good you don't think I do XD No prob ma'am. Will continue to do so!

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*lulusoccer Jul 6, 2009, 4:47:50 PM
Hum, for some reason I can't help but think this would be better in black and white? I don't really think the shirts colors go with this photo! However, I do really like the photo, I'm just not sure about the colors, although the green and lighting coming through the forest near the top is beautiful :D

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12) Risk
13) Love
14) Travel Light" - Katrina Kittle
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~intricate-illusion Jul 6, 2009, 5:27:49 PM
Yeah, I actually did try this in black and white first. P: I thought though, that the bright light in the trees distracted from the actual point of interest of the photo, so I left it in color. I'll try again though, and see what happens.
I like the lighting here too. Thanks a lot for the helpful comment! :aww:

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~intricate-illusion Jul 6, 2009, 5:53:04 PM
I have it in black and white at the moment, what do you think?

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*lulusoccer Jul 6, 2009, 6:05:30 PM
No problem!! Good luck with it :D :D

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"11) Be Present
12) Risk
13) Love
14) Travel Light" - Katrina Kittle
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*lulusoccer Jul 6, 2009, 6:06:53 PM
Hum, you know I do really like it in black and white! I think you could possibly do two separate deviations with this, one in color, and one in black and white! Another possible suggestion for this one is to add like a 10px white border to it!

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"11) Be Present
12) Risk
13) Love
14) Travel Light" - Katrina Kittle
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*lulusoccer Jul 6, 2009, 6:08:48 PM
Ps: oh..and I know the lighting near the top is definitely stronger with the colored version, but you can still see the lighting and it still looks good with the black and white!

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"11) Be Present
12) Risk
13) Love
14) Travel Light" - Katrina Kittle
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Jul 1, 2009, 11:42:21 AM

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